Just wanted to say that the prose is very smooth...I forgot I was reading a story. Often the 'play-by-play' narrative in these horny stories gets in the way of the sensuality/eroticism but you were descriptive, not distracting.
A little too soon for the anal insertion for me...but that's a matter of taste. I'm a big fan of the oils, so it was more comfortable.
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Things are getting hotter and hotter!
WOW! Next chapter, please?
keep em cumming ;)
Good story-telling
Just wanted to say that the prose is very smooth...I forgot I was reading a story. Often the 'play-by-play' narrative in these horny stories gets in the way of the sensuality/eroticism but you were descriptive, not distracting.
A little too soon for the anal insertion for me...but that's a matter of taste. I'm a big fan of the oils, so it was more comfortable.
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