All Comments on 'Auntie's New Tenant Ch. 03'

by BrettJ

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
One for the good guys.

BJ ,You've done T.O proud . So far one helluva story and hope to read more from Katrina's House.Ciao and good luck,

kingswedekingswedealmost 9 years ago
More sooner

What took you FOUR yers to write this chapter? Great story line, so much MORE ans sooner.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
And then the local sorority has a bug problem,

so Auntie invites ten more ladies to share the house for a few weeks. And then a space ship of supermodel alien ladies shows up. And then a plague wipes out all other men as well as any women less than an 8 in looks. And the new world government votes unanimously that Dan belongs to everyone, so he is kept as a breeder in a Playboy mansion style life that ensures that he keeps humanity alive. __

Or maybe, five is enough. Especially when they are all bisexual. Fiction is one thing. Try hard not to make this cartoony.

BrettJBrettJalmost 9 years agoAuthor
From the author

First, it's getting a bit tedious to read all the "anonymous" negative comments. At least this one tried to make some valid points.

Second - I write a variety of styles on this site. Some romantic, some kinky, some outrageous - I've even written SF and "Futa". Not all of my stories are going to be grounded in the real world to the same degree. IF I decided that "Auntie" lived down the street from a sorority of sex-crazed Swedish exchange students - so long as the story remains fun for the reader - so what?

I do have some future thoughts for this tale. I'd left it alone for a few years but recently when a fan asked for more, I got a few thoughts and they have spread. I can well imagine this tale isn't for everyone - but I can say, it was a kick to write.

Thanks to my supporters.

~~BrettJ

Zeke503Zeke503over 8 years ago
AGREE

I share your belief about the 'wonderful' Mr./Ms. Anonymous. If a person has a valid comment to add they should be willing to sign their name to it. If, not, it is almost always signed Anonymous.

I am very glad that you were inspired to continue the story and hope that you will still have the time and are willing to make the effort to continue with additional chapters that you will post FOR OUR ENTERTAINMENT ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have tried to write some items for this site and I therefore appreciate the time and effort involved in trying to provide not just some sexy situation, but one that makes at least some sense and doesn't have a huge amount of spelling and grammatical errors in it.

Please do accept the appreciation of those of us who do recognize the effort required and continue with your endeavors. THANK YOU very much for your dedication ! ! ! ! ! ! !

hardheadd1hardheadd1over 8 years ago
more

would like to see more of this story.

Gryphon1321Gryphon1321over 8 years ago
Great series

Hope you continue the fun. Very sexy characters though I like the aunt the best. I will be adding you to my favorites and checking back from time to time to see if you've added a new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great story.. Have potential, so I'm hoping you are planning to continue, even though it have been written over a few years

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 8 years ago

I would like to read more of this story

TIGERWOLFSTORMTIGERWOLFSTORMover 6 years ago

damn another dead story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I don't agree with the last comment...

I think that what's dead is your imagination, not this story... BrettJ, Great Story...

Keep up the good work... Don't let people like that Butt Head get you down...Write what's in your heart...To Hell with the Critics....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Incomplete Ending

story was good until the sudden and incomplete ending. Another chapter was due, but it doesn't look like thats happening. Too bad

JReadmoreJReadmoreover 2 years ago

Great story. Another chapter would have been nice, but I enjoyed as it was.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yup another quick ending story. The story is hot but where is the rest of it?

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