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Love anime
Cool drawing but i wish you explained more about it. And not just hare is a anime girl and hare is what she is wearing. Details, details, you're killing us hare!!)
But on the other hand a little interpation is always a healthy thing!!)
Really Love To Judge....
!= Love Anime I guess my review is based on that (sort of) 2= Instead of describing the colors maybe next time you could, oh I don't know perhaps add it in? Just an idea. 3= I find intersting that you took the trouble describing the colors but not the situation or the location that would have helped with your score. 4= The bright side is you're good at hand drawing. 5= To me she does not look 'aroused' she looks more like 'tired' or 'worn out' after a long battle or something. 6= And hare is where the anime part comes in, I'm not sure you attended be that way. But to me she looks like a Gundam Pilot. 7= And finally, I would have loved to have more detail for the background then just that 'Metal Cross Bar Thing' So with that said I think you are capeable of doing better.
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