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The Liquids Rule Ch. 02

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by Anonymous07/19/15

Good writing

You are a gifted story teller. I like how you describe the thought process of your characters. I appreciate the inside view into the girl's mind, and the stark difference between her abuser's mind. Only thing I would consider changing is the category. Maybe exhibitionist/voyeur would be more suitable for this chapter. Perhaps other members can chime in on that. Regardless, it is very good writing.

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