All Comments on 'A Wife's Life Among Savages Ch. 01'

very sexy and well written, keep it going pleased

Aids, no toilet paper etc. Just stupid.

for your effort

Usually don't expect 9 pages and it was an excellent backstory and the perfect set-up to Kelly falling for Leopan--well written! The only thing that could have topped that would have been Jonathan getting to see Leopan taking Kelley, but when Kelley went the distance with Leopan twice. Jonathan was such a turd!

More soon please! Seeing her and her new friend get kidnapped was a shocker indeed. I hope to read about Leopan rushing to her rescue and killing those raiding males.

Contrary to the "Plain Stupid" remark of one Anon, this was a great story which displayed the amount of time you spent researching out the customs of the tribes. The plot and character development was really good. I too wish that Jonathan had gotten to see his wife experiencing not one but two orgasms from Leopan. That would have put him in his place as a piss ass lover.

Please please continue this story! You are an amazing writer!!

THANKS!

any your story is awesome! we're waiting for the part 2 so badly!

we can't wait!

star 5 - without any doubts.

You've got a good start so far. Other than a little bit of editing and the need to spell check, it was a good story. Can't wait to continue reading this one.

Awesome! Please continue!

Anxiously awaiting the continuation of the series.

Interesting story with sex integral to the plot. Likeable characters. Many grammar errors, but the positives far outweigh those.

I love long stories that have good character development and good story plot.

It took me 3 evenings to get through this one. Hope the next chapter is just as long.

Great work. Amazing story. Keep it up.

Please bring out the next chapter soon!!!

One the best i have read on literotica... Keep it going

At last, a new fix!!

Really? 9 pages. This isn't a site for submitting novels, it's a site for (short) sex stories.

I adore this erotic story. I will be waiting for the next chapter.

"Writing a novel?

Really? 9 pages. This isn't a site for submitting novels, it's a site for (short) sex stories."

Go fuck yourselft. Beyound the borderline consists more than 50 pages.

Don't listen to the critics. This was a splendid story. I was so turned on while reading it.

Really loved the story and how detailed it was. You really got a sense of the characters and the plot moved beautifully.

Excellent story, did not put this down. I travel even more in Asia and I can agree with the story in dealings with island natives. Many are rich with culture and history. Even with modern conveniences I still love and enjoy visiting many areas around Papua New Guinea, Indonesia and many places not so isolated like Philippines, Malaysia and Thailand. Dealing with very small communities or villages is exactly how you portrayed in the story. Well done. The fact the husband was a greedy capitalist speaks volumes why this country is deep in debt. Gold fever or thirst for wealth has ruined many lives, don't think so, visit Las Vegas or any Gambling town and watch how many college savings are blown, house titles are lost and families go broke and homeless and penny less in a matter of hours. However, I am one that believes the value and appreciation of marriage and tend to think that the husband, knew his life was in danger if he stepped up, I feel in the next chapter this attacking tribe was acting out of payment to rescue his wife the fact that she is pregnant hopefully will not change his views or love. The only way is to wait and see what the author does or writes. Well done

Perhaps one of my favorites in a long time back. This theme is very alluring. I liked this even better than the Amazon tribe story. The character's sound very real and the chemistry has been described beautifully with minimal words.

I have written my own stories on literotica; you can find them by name vyasya.

I loved the first chapter and couldn't stop reading. Definately one of my favorites. I thought it was a perfect length and was sad to reach the end. Keep on writing you are awesome at it.

This story really has my attention! Kelly is an amazing woman and I can't wait to see how Leopan will react to her abduction! He is young and strong, but is he a crafty and calculating leader? Please continue this story!

King,

What a great start for a promising plot line

Don't keep us waiting. Please!

Tex

really liked the story. are you going to finish the final chapters? please hurry if you are.

I would like to apologize to all my readers for the delay in putting a new chapter. Unfortunately, I'm going through a rough time to spare enough free time to write. As a result of English not being my first language, and my inexperience in writing, it takes a considerable amount of effort and time to do it.

Still, all the comments and feedback from my readers keeps me motivated and moved; after reading all those kind replies, I would feel guilty if I abandon this story now. So even though It might take few more months, I'll do my best to finish the story.

Thank you very much.

All of your stories are very good but this is one of the best. Great job of developing the characters and integrating them into a logical outcome. Have reread several times and look forward to see the outcome from the raid and what happens to both Kelly and Urula

This is the best story I have read in literotica, and I am reading it since 2000. Please complete the story when you have time.

Many thanks for sharing such an erotic and enjoyable story

One of the worst on this site !!

the asshole of LIT hated it,. But then this ass wipe hates everything he a sad old ugly fag!! Gave it a 5

Please give an update on when will you continue this?

...when we will see ch. 2? :)

Now it's way past time for the next chapter. 5*

No chances for new chapters?

will we see ch. 2? Ch. 1 was brilliant!

I shouldn't say this but that story makes me so runny. I have read it twice now and I have had to have a cold shower afterwards both times. It's a rare thing for me to read erotica and most I simply haven't liked. I am waiting for the next installment thank you so much

Susan M

This should have a part 2

Great story. Chapter 2 is long overdue.

Great story well write

Please write chapter 2 I want to know what happened?

Does she end up rescued her and Jonathan work it out and a happy ending

Does Lebanon save her?

Where is Chapter 2?

I just read the story for the second time. It ranks among the top of my favorites. The chemistry has been beautifully described, creating word pictures that stimulate one's emotional, mental and physical responses. Thank you!

It is time to continue.

This is my new fantasy now; getting impregnated by a handsome tribal man with pure genes.

Please give us an update!!!!!

I can't believe you spent so much time writing something this good and then Just f****** ending it in this manner. A** Wipe

It was a good story, and it would be nice to see it continue. I would be curious to see how the tribe handles the gold miners when they come. I also hope Kelly and Leopan are back to gether

A second chapter please you can't just leave us like this to many loose ends , will they be rescued,will the gold diggers come and the tribe survive. MORE PLEASE

For any one who is interested in reading the rest of this story it can be found on Amazon. The link is on the author's biography page

Please share the correct Author name and or title so I can find this on Amazon; I copied the link and came up blank...

It worked for me. There are three chapters, at least so far, on Amazon. Though I'm disappointed that they aren't here for free, I wish the author success with his writing.

Wowwwwwwww it was so interesting waiting for the next chapter

I noticed you haven’t written in a couple of years. I really enjoyed this story... will you be completing the series? I would love to know what happens.

A wonderfull storey, would love to have it continue.

Really well written.

the usual BBC mythology, brainwashed lie-accepting interracial gutter slut wife, addicted to nonexistent BBC. Just awful, especially when you throw in a cuck moron for extra lameness.

Loved it keep going please.

Sorry for the late comment I have just discovered Lirotica. I loved it. So much detail I could clearly visualize it. I liked the gradual build up to the sexy parts. I hope you continue the story for I'm truly vested in the story and what happens to Kelly. You are very talented keep them coming.

Very well written. I hope second part will be also good

Excellent story! Saddened to see that you have not submitted a Part 2,or anything since 2015. This story cries out for more!

Great story I hope that there is more to come?

Please write part two. This is a great story.

Wow, a nice long read, great, I'll give it another read with a friend in hand. My husband had a years long FWB with a slightly older married woman in his office with much bigger tits. I was 34 and devastated, he up and left the kids and I, we quickly divorced. Well the tits moved on, after she ended the FWB, he texted one evening hinting at getting back together. My reply: A short video of a nice BBC, my Tinder FWB, fucking my pussy with me yelling harder.

Your story definitely deserves more chapters. Like other comments, nicely detailed and I’m invested. So much more than just a stroke story. I hope you see your feedback and write a chapter 2 soon.