The Sleepover

I loved it!! :D

This is probably the best peice of writing I've read on this site for a while. Deffo continue this! What happens next!

Not bad but ...

why is it that so often you start "Speech" on one line

and continue as a new paragraph??

Very nice

Looking forward to more from you

Good read!

Hooked on part one...next please!!!

Sexy Sam?

You mention that Addie placed her head on his chest, playing with his hair. I'm assuming he has hair on that chest, and since no mention was made of HIS shirt,
I'm assuming he was shirtless in the kitchen and Addie got a look (in the dark) at his bare chest. Later, in the bedroom, she could enjoy his chest hair during their lovemaking. That could be part of her turn-on!

Keep the story going!

Fun

go This is what fun sleepovers are really for. If your host falls asleep, and there is a mutual heat between two consenting adults, go for it.(Have a condom at the ready, it's safer than retreating at the last second)

hot story!

Loved it :)

When did Addie put her pants on?

When did Addie put her pants on?

use this story

I wanted to use this story for something I'm writing mostly because I have never had sex and I need a good sex scene and this is perfect if you can contact me @ pittmanhead@gmail.com that would be great thanks

You can't take off anyone's panties when their legs are wrapped around another persons waist. Other than that, nice story. Lol.

So beautiful!

Just what I love! A hot story, but also super romantic! I want another secret sleepover romp mmmm Sam!