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Kelly, Patrick and Elizabeth

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/23/15

You forgot to warn us about this being bad

Poorly conceived, badly written drivel. UGH! But if Bonnie finds it you'll get a good score from him.

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by Anonymous07/23/15

Found it!!! Gave you a 5 for content and effort

annony is such an asshole no attention to his rambling and bitching!!

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Not Great

I found this story to only focus on anal and a strapon. There is no real foundation as to why the characters are superior and Kelly would have had to take out the garbage before being strangled and caged. There was nothing great about this story

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