I won't say you redeemed him any here, but the landslide of hate has stopped. We shall see were you take him. Still too long un-observed. 30+ orgasms. I own lady parts. That doesn't sound erotic, even as a fantasy. There is a point the system just shuts down or changes to bad sensation. You gave her the power to stop it and she didn't until then, but 30+, that's a ridiculous guy number. See what I can make you do! Um, no. The crop. Multiple lines of cap-locked THWACKS does not impart intensity. It is silly. He is, at least, much less of a psycho this chapter. Thank you.
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Anonymous07/22/15
And down the gutter we go
Wrap this mess up and go onto something else. This was awful, start to finish.
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I won't say you redeemed him any here, but the landslide of hate has stopped. We shall see were you take him. Still too long un-observed. 30+ orgasms. I own lady parts. That doesn't sound erotic, even as a fantasy. There is a point the system just shuts down or changes to bad sensation. You gave her the power to stop it and she didn't until then, but 30+, that's a ridiculous guy number. See what I can make you do! Um, no. The crop. Multiple lines of cap-locked THWACKS does not impart intensity. It is silly. He is, at least, much less of a psycho this chapter. Thank you.
And down the gutter we go
Wrap this mess up and go onto something else. This was awful, start to finish.
Loved it!
Don't know what the issue is with those other comments: I loved them all! If it doesn't match real life, then it's fantasy. Very hot.
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