by crazygirl18
This isn't really a story. Maybe a vignette. Or an opening paragraph. But other than some mindless abuse, no story here. Bad.
I gave it a 5 w/o reading it, only of what the asshole annony has to say about it.
... it worked for me! And if it annoys nonny, so much the better -- five stars.
Would like to read more from you. Ignore the one a-hole "anon". He dumps on every story of this type...ALL THE TIME!
Ah, you cruel tease! Too short; that is the only complaint.
But well written and quite hot! Will use this to tease my slave and build his anticipation!
really thumbs up you are crazy nothing hot about this is not hot and its filthy and nasty feel like vormitting am out of here