On The Train

Great story

Keep iT going maybe put à daughter in THE mix.

Yeah, this is a fun story, and I'd like to see more. Keep writing it. And as the last comment mentioned, I bet her daughters are also hot, and available ;)

Well, I would prefer another installment with the scarlet johansson stunt double, but another of this story would also be very good.

Not her daughter....how about her sister? 5 *

Either way....keep it going. Thanks Don

Continue

Please!!!!

hell there has to be more

I do hope there is more you have a great writing style

Very good. Keep going.

Continue

More.....

Please!

Yes

Continue. The characters are fleshed out and the sex fits into the story. A five.

Great

Good story. Continue please. Get her frightened when he takes her arse just to please him

can't wait

for much more.

I LIKE it !!!

I LIKE it !!! Need more please

I enjoyed the story.

And if you're considering writing more chapters, I'm all for it. For a woman who's been faithful for so long, I'd guess Samantha has a lot of catching up to do. And we still don't know what either of them actually do for a living. It's be convenient if one of them was a lawyer who specialized in divorce, wouldn't it? Take Sam's husband to the cleaners and make up for lost time? Also, Samantha's remark about "identifying some coworkers with lesbian tendencies" didn't indicate she disapproved. Perhaps part of her experimentation with new things could include a threesome with another woman?

Very Good

I really enjoyed this story. A very nice buildup not just a quick wham bam story. Please continue the series.

Nicely done

Who hasn't had a fantasy about someone on the train? Nice to read a story of it going further and a well written one at that, look forward to more from you.

I Enjoyed this story

You craft a story in an exceptional way!

You could use another story to provide additional details on the male protagonist I.e.
He apparently has good job, superior male equipment, a nice home BUT no wife/girlfriend. Next follow up on hat Sam does when hubby returns

Thanks for contributing

Ed

Very hot

Put a lump in my pants. Looking forward to more.

Very Good Story

Yes, more please. This story begs to be continues.

More, More, More

Really want to see where this goes. Please continue.

More please

Continue please hope they get married

nice job

and plenty of hooks left to be satisfied
1. co workers
2. daughters
3. husband's girl friends?
4. Alex's past exploits

this could take another lifetime for these two to complete
thanks
and more!

Great

Great story. Very believable. Damn.. I wish it would happen on my train lol

Great Story

Thoroughly enjoyed it. Please continue!

MORE!!!!

i enjoyed it very much! Please continue. Please!!

Fantastic

ICan't wait for the next chapter this can really be a novel. Keep up the good writing

Super

A superb story, well put together with an excellent slow build up of a plot to draw the reader in. There is mileage in this story, Samantha taking her cheating hubbie through a divorce and the revelations of his transgressions. Brilliant you definitely need to continue this story line and of course putting the two love-birds Alex and Samantha together.

Superb story

great background and build up, you really did a great job with this story, one of the better that I have read on this forum

Older IS better!

What a great story. My wife is older than me and the marriage (2nd for both) has been wonderful. Hot! Hot! Hot!

I sure hope that there is much more to come about the love life of Alex and Sam. I certainly don't blame her for not wanting to ruin her chance to get her financial rewards for putting up with a cheating husband for so many years.

I eagerly look forward to the next episode!

MORE

My five star vote is indicative of my thots 4 more

Keep the series going!!

answering your question

Sam and Alex have a fan - Here!
Keep the story going, please. Would like to hear how and what the husband / ass hole gets as his just desserts. Cheating and being blindsided - what a karma- like denouement.

Got my motor running!

I really enjoyed the pace of the story. The wording worked to paint a picture of an all too common occurrence these days when couples disconnect when one party thinks they can recapture their youth by being unfaithful. It seems getting old together has become passé. Write on my man, I need to know how this will end from your point of view.....

Keep it simple

27 years is a big age difference and in my opinion won't work, long term. So, fuck buddies it is. Keep other fuckable people out of it. Right now, it's just a sweet sex story. A 47 year old hottie like her is going to get a lot of attention from men her own age, once word gets out she is divorced; interesting men with a history, with means, and a mature perspective no 23 year old guy has. He's got a nice cock and lots of energy but that won't keep her, long term. What would they talk about? They might get married but they could never have children together. And he's four years younger than her daughter! So write on, but don't venture into the realm of science fiction. BTW, at least in my state, DNA evidence and infidelity in general is mostly irrelevant in a divorce action. No fault divorce, don't cha know? Good prose, not too many clunky sentences. No classy woman her age would have sex in a public bathroom, or a car for that matter. That's kid stuff. Let them fuck up a storm for a while, then move on, both of them, to more age appropriate relationships with a future.

loved the language she used

This is a great story and should continue

Fantastic

Every lonely commuter's fantasy brought to life! And a romance budding too. More!

Very good - if it ends here ...

As others have said, this catching story has lot of potential for continuation - but it will hardly match the excellent build-up you've already given us. Could be an interesting divorce story and some well written love making until she finds a nice and 'healthy' man equaling her own maturity , but why not quit on top?

Very Sensual - More Please!

A very hot beginning to what may become a small series (another chapter or two) of an exciting story. Samantha is very taken with Alex and it would be great to see how their relationship continues. So many questions needing answers with so many possibilities to explore. More is very much appreciated!

continue

keep going the story is good

This story

Has a lot of potential. These two definitely need to have their story told

Excellent read.....please continue writing their story!!

More please, and ignore anonymous mouse turds who lack any balls...

Tell you what, Mr. Anonymous, grow a pair and at least link your long winded replies to a non- identifying account. Otherwise shut up and let the rest of us enjoy an obviously talent ended writer in peace. Is that really too much to ask?

That said, I enjoyed the story and hope the author continues.

Wonderful Story!!

This was a great read. I know the pleasures of having an older female lover (I'm 43, and she's 59), and you nailed this story. Great job, and I hope you continue their adventures.

Continue pos this is such a romantic story with the perfect

Amount of secret sex

may-december affair is an enjoyable read. i hope to read the sequel to this story
soon.

Turn this into a series? Make it so!

YES. CONTINUE!!!

You mentioned she has daughters. Pervy Question mark.

Superb slow build-up!

You've gotten her orgasmicly cheating--What next? More daring sex in public? Some slowly developing domination and her submission? Don't stop yet!

Really looking forward to the next chapters,

PLEASE continue this series.

Best thing I've read on LitE in a long, long time.

Great storyline

I really like where you took,this storyline. I can't wait to read ch2.

Like GOOD!!!

Nicely done. The build up was good. The motivation was reasonable. Keep it like that and keep it coming.