All Comments  for

4 Inches Pt. 01

byStriderJohn©
All
Comments (5)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/18/15

part 2?!?!

DEFINITELY need part 2 ! Pretty curious about the rest of story

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by StriderJohn08/20/15

Part 2

Part 2 is ready to publish,but I feel I may need to modify it to get it past the moderators. It deals with an arranged marriage for a fourteen year old girl, and Literotica rules ban underage (under 18) sex. I have tried to include just enough detail to make it plausible and relevant,but I may need to negotiate!

Keep your eyes open.

John

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous08/28/15

absolutely wonderful

I've never commented on any story on here but, this has got to be one of my favorites.
It's a great story and a revolving mood, it's always got something nee the further you get into the text. So please, add the second story. I'm sure we all would love to read more of your work.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by StriderJohn09/07/15

Still negotiating part 2

My apologies for the delay in part 2 - it has been bounced by the moderators three times so far, I am trying to find ways of describing a failed arranged marriage without ripping out the point of the whole story,but not getting much back from the moderators.

I hope you enjoy it when it does arrive.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Brett78x09/26/15

So.......

Was this a story about a Brit attending high school in the US.? Organising? Learnt? Grammatically correct but regionally not Yank lingo.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to 4 Inches Pt. 01  or
More submissions by StriderJohn.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel