It was like I was watching a MILF gangbang porno. Fucking hot action all over. Loved the way made her a slut for four studs.
But it was a little weird that four brothers would gangbang a lady together. Not one in a billion times it will take place. Moreover, the lady was there babysitter, like mother to them. It made a hard incest story then. As I am not a fond of incest stories, I was offended. If the lady was not related, may be girlfriend of one of the guys, the guys were friends it would have been better to me.
Fucking hot! Please keep on writing stuff like this!
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Anonymous07/29/15
Please get an editor
This was very very hot, but distracting because of tons of little typos! Story was great, just need at least a once-over to catch that stuff, please! Let your writing shine.
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Written porn, Excellent story!
It was like I was watching a MILF gangbang porno. Fucking hot action all over. Loved the way made her a slut for four studs.
But it was a little weird that four brothers would gangbang a lady together. Not one in a billion times it will take place. Moreover, the lady was there babysitter, like mother to them. It made a hard incest story then. As I am not a fond of incest stories, I was offended. If the lady was not related, may be girlfriend of one of the guys, the guys were friends it would have been better to me.
Thanks anyway for writing a so hot story!
Fucking hot! Please keep on writing stuff like this!
Please get an editor
This was very very hot, but distracting because of tons of little typos! Story was great, just need at least a once-over to catch that stuff, please! Let your writing shine.
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