I have enjoyed reading each of your postings for this story greatly. I look forward each day to logging-in and hope to see your next installment waiting. A strong hope for a detailed continuing of the storyline ...
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Anonymous07/27/15
Story shaping up very nicely
As soon as Iris had a sense of recognition, I guessed that the new wolf was James Atherton - primarily because of the author's phrasing, and the other men Iris met she didn't like, and the initial setup in chapter 1, where Greg was thinking of how his daughters would cope without him (Dad wants to make sure his "princesses" are going to be OK after he is gone - awww).
An excellent way to rope readers into the story. Will Greg "adopt" James as his son-in-law and future pack leader? I'm eagerly looking forward to see how this progresses.
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Anonymous07/28/15
I didn't want it to end! I'm ready for the next chapters!
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Anonymous09/15/15
Why are they so formal with their father??? What's with the helpless damsel routine? Good story but it would be nice to see female characters that can take care of themselves and not be weak.
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So good but so short!
Luckily for us, you're posting quickly!
Thank you for a very well written story
I have enjoyed reading each of your postings for this story greatly. I look forward each day to logging-in and hope to see your next installment waiting. A strong hope for a detailed continuing of the storyline ...
Story shaping up very nicely
As soon as Iris had a sense of recognition, I guessed that the new wolf was James Atherton - primarily because of the author's phrasing, and the other men Iris met she didn't like, and the initial setup in chapter 1, where Greg was thinking of how his daughters would cope without him (Dad wants to make sure his "princesses" are going to be OK after he is gone - awww).
An excellent way to rope readers into the story. Will Greg "adopt" James as his son-in-law and future pack leader? I'm eagerly looking forward to see how this progresses.
I didn't want it to end! I'm ready for the next chapters!
Why are they so formal with their father??? What's with the helpless damsel routine? Good story but it would be nice to see female characters that can take care of themselves and not be weak.
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