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Technically We're Estranged Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/27/15

more please

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by Rasmat07/27/15

Outstanding.

As usual.

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by Anonymous07/27/15

lots more please

patiently waiting for tons more chapters.

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by prop6907/27/15

Love the series

Interesting options between Bella and Mel

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by goldpony07/28/15

smooth man.....smooth

you deliver an amazing story at a pace that builds, builds, then smooths out......ah. Enjoy the development and tempo, but wish they were a little longer and delivered quicker. But because they are so good will stand the current flow. Thanks for sharing with us, and your kinky mind. Wish I was "closer" with my cousins, two blondes, a brunette, and a redhead. GP

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by rightbank07/28/15

you are having fun with the variations on names

I am trying to figure out who is estranged from whom. Steve, Bella, Mel, or? Did I miss something in an earlier chapter explaining what it means?

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by Anonymous07/30/15

please hurry!

Both this and Font are brilliant! I am hooked... cannot wait for the next of both

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by BreakTheBar07/30/15

Thanks all

Hey folks,

Thanks for all the votes and comments. TWE 4 will be coming very soon, though Chapter 5 will take a bit as I need to prioritize my other series.

To the question about 'who is estranged,' I thought the concept was fairly clear that Mel and Stephan are estranged. The definition of estranged relatives is as follows: 'no longer friendly, alienated.' Mel and Stephan have not spoken in years and have lost touch with each other - they might still be friendly if they were to run into each other, but otherwise have no contact.

Until this story, of course.

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by Anonymous07/30/15

Can't wait for more

I check back every day!

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by Anonymous07/30/15

i love the way this story is unfolding cant wait to see if he makes a tape for mel or she sees his face on cam going to be great

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by cliquegge08/02/15

loving it

I will get to the "Font" series soon.

Thanks

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by LUSTYWHEELS04/29/16

wicked!

I love it but he needs to stop tipping and send a plane ticket. The 3 of them can have real fun

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