All Comments on 'A Surprising Shower'

by MrHitchens

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good one.

Nice flow and rythm. Believable sex between lovers familiar with each other. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nicely done

This is exactly what a short, hot stroke story should be. Very realistic. Great job. Also a nice promotion for tankless heaters :).

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