and then does a 180 and becomes a patriate with family. TK U MLJ LV NV
I think this doesn't deserve a comment...2*
I found it entertaining and not that realistic. But a fun read.
For the read.
Great job and story look forward to seeing more
Another story where the guy is the guilty party so there are no BnB and lack of revenge comments. Wouldn't expect anything less from the misogynists out there. Great story, enjoyed it thanks
Nice characterizations and ending. Not as much of a twist and little, if any, suspense, but it was nice solid writing with an interesting premise. I've always wanted to be able to poop off a couple of million dollars, too.
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and then does a 180 and becomes a patriate with family. TK U MLJ LV NV
I think this doesn't deserve a comment...
I think this doesn't deserve a comment...2*
Several New Stories Today This is the only one that a gave *****
I found it entertaining and not that realistic. But a fun read.
Thanks ***
For the read.
Business
Great job and story look forward to seeing more
Good story
Another story where the guy is the guilty party so there are no BnB and lack of revenge comments.
Wouldn't expect anything less from the misogynists out there.
Great story, enjoyed it thanks
A fun read...
Nice characterizations and ending. Not as much of a twist and little, if any, suspense, but it was nice solid writing with an interesting premise.
I've always wanted to be able to poop off a couple of million dollars, too.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Getting Ahead in Business or
More submissions by imhapless.