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hotttt
boys if you want to know what makes a woman hot, this is it. i got so hot from reading this... mmmmmmm. delish!
*sigh*
If only I could weave a story such as this! Well done!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh man, that was sooo, so HOT! Absolutely fabulous, wonderful terrific and a whole lot of other words to express: phew, baby! And totally yummy
whew!
Hurry up and finish the story already!!!!
WOW!
Absolutely adored this story... can't wait for some more!
One of the best stories here!
I loved this story!! Please tell me there's more... awesome job, by the way.
whew
That was awesome. Intensely hot sex done with little to no vulgarity. I think I was too caught up to notice anything I could try to leave constructive criticism on :) Just plain wow
Wow
This was a very very hot story. I was imagining myself as Sunny and getting a little flushed at the same time. I love this piece of work. I hope to see more.
really great story!!!
wow, that was a great story, I would love to get the long version or more about Sunny and Daemon:)
wow
please hurry and put the book out!!! this was awesome!
Interesting
I liked it, however, I'm thinking that this particular story requires a bit of backstory/history. A second and third. Perhaps a prequel and a sequel to fill out the flesh of the relationship between Daemon & Sunny?
Katrina
anana_girlslave@msn.com
Great Story
Just read this story and I have to say it was very well written and I thoroughly enjoyed it!
I just wanted to say...
this is one of my favorite series on this website. The characters are believable, the sex is great, and there is depth of plot to keep me intrigued...over and over and over again. Thanks for the story
Confused
I saw this was a contest winner, and judging by everyone elses' comments your story is very good! I started to read, but I thought I missed a ch. because it felt like I missed something. After making sure this was #1 I continued reading some more and I liked what was going on, but I kept thinking "Well what is that?, Why?," etc. So, I guess what I'm saying is you should add in a lil prelude, because I was so lost, I didn't want to continue.
Well...
This looks to be interesting.
Awesome!!
wow... i just came across this one while browsing.. why don't you write anymore?!
Hey Fallen, check the lady's bio, she is published :)
Thank you LOTM, I think I am in love (with the you that is in Sunny, of course). This is so sexy and loving that I can hardly type for the passion driven panting that I am experiencing. Lynn
p.s. on re-reading this I think I am also in love with what I wish were me in Sunny :)
p.p.s. "t'likker" could be a contraction for "to lick her" or it could be a form of "the liquor."
This is really great so far! I feel like I've found a hidden gem!
Great story so far!
Top quality writing! This looks to make my top 3 (with A Slave to the Servants & The Sacrifice). Very good stuff!
Hehe
So if Daemon and Sunny were a celebrity couple, they would be SunDae :)
timeless
Read this story 4 years ago & I had to find it again!!!
It hasn't lost anything the 2nd time around
I really enjoyed the whole series. Great job!
I really enjoyed the whole series. Great job!
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