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A Tease for Two Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/27/15

VERY NICELT DONE

Your timing of action went smoothly and I enjoyed the pre-dinner conversation. The decision to be kissed and setting silverware aside was an excellent transition. I enjoyed your short story.

A favorite read for me is the decision by a married woman to expand her sexual outlets from just her husband to include women. Now that their night, post bi-sexual encounter has begun, Matt and his wife will have an opportunity to talk. I'd enjoy that conversation.

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by SPEN STERLING07/27/15

wow

Great set up, love the realistic and believable story line. I wouldn't mind if the story had a second chapter!

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by Anonymous07/27/15

I really enjoyed this.

Thank you for a well written, exciting and erotic story. Please write more.

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by Anonymous07/28/15

Perfect!

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by Anonymous07/30/15

very good

Your story was very good, what happened next did he do both of you, are you a threesome, friends, or a one time deal?

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by LeFrog0807/30/15

very nicely done.

I liked the gentle seduction and the complicity. And the fact that no cheating was involved since everything was overt and in front of Matt.

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by Anonymous10/02/15

Perfect Orgasm First Time For Her

It is lovely. Perfect where it is placed. So what if Matt is there. If I were to have lesbian sex, my husband would be there whether in sight or hiding with my blessing. Just because two women do it, and hubby is there, he didn't do anything but watch. And play with himself.

I loved the story. I don't need a 7 page melodrama. I want a plot; I want to connect, then I want a fuck of some sort that makes me feel like I participated. Like I was there and here I was. Thank you!

Come over and do this to me while my husband watches. Please?! Fuck me too.

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by Anonymous10/02/15

A Tease for two

A great story,erotic, and sensual. Hope to see more.

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by MICHAELG196310/02/15

well written

I like the way you established the relationships prior to the sexual action. Well written and looking forward to 2nd chapter

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by charliebill11/02/15

Great Story

This is one of my hottest fantasies, but never had it happen. If it did I’m sure I would be masturbating just like her husband!!!

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by robertl12/03/15

MMMMM!

Your slow seduction in this was a definite turn-on. Then leaving her to her husband was an excellent and unexpected twist. Enjoyed the story very much!

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