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A Fantastical Kidnapping Ch. 00

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/28/15

Strange yes, sexy no.

Poorly conceived and badly told. Get an editor. Then get a better story line.

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by Anonymous07/28/15

Well

I'll read the next chapter!

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by abington07/29/15

Good start

You have made a good start with your story. Do not be discouraged ! Keep on writing, and let us see where you take us. have a nice day.

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by Anonymous07/30/15

i liked it

cant wait for the next chapter xxx nicely detailed and started

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by 1789307/31/15

very soon!

How long is very soon? =)

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by Anonymous09/10/15

I like the storyline

I liked the writing style and I'm looking forward to more chapters! :)

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by littlebittyjet09/10/15

Great intro

You're off to a great start! Now on to the next chapter...

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