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by akilfinch

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What would I do?

Throwup and run. Which is what I did after reading this truly despicable attempt at writing. Just awful. Has Lit standards sunken this far?

akilfinchakilfinchover 8 years agoAuthor
Question for Anonymous

I really appreciate the feedback, as long as you have a reaction I am overjoyed. Is it the content or the writing quality that made you "throwup and run"

Honest answers only, this is a growing experience. Be brutal, I can take it.

akilfinchakilfinchover 8 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous

I appreciate your feedback, keep it coming. I really need to know, is it the CONTENT or the WRITING that is terrible?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
DONT STOP WRITING PLEASE

I REALLY ENJOYED IT :)

PLEASE GO ON, WRITE MOREEEEEE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

You are an excellent writer. I’ve loved all your stories. I think my favorite parts are the snot porn. The Lovecraftian aspects of the middle series were particulary well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i’d leave

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