Karen's Slavery Ch. 01

Promising

Im interested in the next chapters, so far a good job! I would like them to be abit longer tho :)

Ridiculous. Not very erotic. Not worth the time to read this chapter.

More Please!

I for one am looking forward to the next chapter

Ridiculous my eye!

Very well written, and extremely arousing. Enjoyed it greatly, keep writing :)

nice read

I very much enjoyed the read am waiting eager for the next chapter. I also agree that the chapters should be longer than the first one. Over all a good job, got me horny pretty fast. Only criticism, and this is my pov only, put more detail in the narrative. Helps the reader to paint a better picture in their minds.

Loved it!

This was a great start and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters. I'm so glad you have them all pre written so we won't have to wait too long for your updates.

excellent story but needs detail

Like the premise I will look forward to more. I wish you would spend a little more detail on the stripping and humiliation. More detail on the inspection too. Perhaps a shaving would be nice.