All Comments on 'Morning Sex'

quick fun and naughty

Very well done. I hope you continue along this line.

But, I do hope you write more for everyone's pleasure. 5 stars.

I don't care for the turn of events in your story (a chastity belt makes me think Tim's a weak dom). However, your writing is of high quality and far better than most I find on Lit. Your 'interests' list is rich with possibilities, and I would enjoy reading more stories by you.

Why are there hardly any dialogs in the story?

This Dom is certainly in control of her orgasism almost to the point of being cruel. He took control of her and forced her to bring him off but has denied her for one hundred and twenty one days. Does the chastity belt not take the responsibility from the Dom to control the orgasim and thereby make him lazy perhaps in his control of his partner? It is good writing and and good story but there needs to be more to show that at some point the Dom does allow the Sub some pleasure.

The story, however, is a bit lacking. Did he marry her just to torture her for cheating? Does he not realize that eventually, she will get tired of their lack of intimacy and when he asks if she still loves him, the answer will be 'no'? What then? Does he try to keep the chastity belt on? I see her leaving if he carries on this way - this is not Dom, it is revenge.

great story

Much more pls we need a lot more female chastity

But he should also take her ass very roughly.