All Comments on 'Unidentified Organisms Ch. 01'

Well done, really digging the Alien vibe looking forward to future chapters

Feel free to continue with more of this... er, please.

Looking forward to more.

Need More!!

You put this out but a month later published chapter 00 as a prolog so where is the timeline on this series? It looks to be a good story a'la alien but it is surely going to get confusing if the timeline and plot lines become tangled.

The prologue is supposed to take place a day or two before chapter 1.

I have a ton of ideas for this series, but it's hard to find the time to write. I'll try to post the second chapter soon.

Please, notify me if there are any plot holes or inconsistencies.

Thanks to all who enjoy my writing. I hope you're not expecting too much. I treat it mostly as an exercise to improve my English skills and as a lazy creative outlet.

How did she discharge so many rounds and no one heard them? Otherwise it seems pretty interesting so far.

Can't wait the next chapter !!

This is a good, well written story!

I don't have much to say about it except that I really like it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

how freaking long u going to make us wait......

Sry not going to happen. Had to eliminate any evidence

I really liked this series but, now the prolog is missing. Did you give up on it?

Check back in a week or two.

your best series... and ur taking forever... and u should have left the prologue... it was fine... its called science fiction for a reason emphasis on FICTION