All Comments on 'The Unexpected'

Nice buildup- good sex - write more

Would really like to read more from this couple!! Very hot!

Wonderful story! I would love to read much more about this couple. Such a tender touch!

I cant believe the characters or the plot.

Well written and hot. However, if I read the "She couldn't believe she said that" cliche or your variation one more time, I'm going to scream.

I loved it I myself love reading, it was erotic and honestly TINDER is a good author and my lesbiand partner has done verry sexualy arrousing things but nothing like this. Maby when she is not home i can sit down on my sofa with my macbook and read it again. Might even grab my vibrateing glass dildo and cum lots.

this is just the way I like it, sweet, tender and a little naughty :)

The sweet seduction and unexpected arousal of Traci is so wonderful.

LOVE IT

Please give us more :)

A great story from beginning to End...

Thank you ,

L

Very well written!

Massage stories especially when the receiver is not sure what is ultimately going to happen are favourites of mine and this was particularly beautify done - the increasing raunchiness of how Tracie feels and does is something I hope we've all felt as passion takes over. Thanks!

I have never been so turned on reading a story. I came across by accident but will certainly look for more. Thank you again.

Omg i am so wet and really wishing i was traci