Wrestling with Incest

Great story

Great story and story lines... Needs a follow up.

Good story, well told, but so needs a follow-up

But then you probably already thought of that! Great story, as always, good pacing, and great use of tension. It's always a pleasure to read something new from Chunks. 5 stars.

excellent story

It's an excellent story it really does need a follow up

Great Story, thanks!

That was a fine read. I'm not sure I can single out what I liked most except for two things. First, is that your writing style naturally flows and is a pleasure to read. Second, the oh shit moment in the end was classic. I have to agree with BB and anon this one would benefit from a follow up if that is in the cards. If not, thank you for what you have given.

Great store hope there is more to follow.

Super job and fantastic story

i can't wait to read more of this. Love the storyline and the buildup

PBD

Real?

I ask, because this episode has the feel of reality. If it's not, it's a great impersonation of truth. A fine job of writing, and if there were errors, who cares? I do hope you'll let us know what happened after mom walked in, chunks. Moms may be a little more understanding, I hope.

Fantasty to fantastic

It even made me cry. With love for the couple I suppose. Xtra star for the ending.

good story until the end

It was a beautiful and very sexy story, until the end.

In my opinion very little was gained by "Mom" appearing. It ruined all the pleasure each had. They were dealing with incest and Mom did not need to be there especially for their first time.
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Still gave you 5, but should have reduced to 4.

Can't wait for the next installment of WI

Great Story!

Given the ending, I hope this is just chapter 1!

Loved it

Great story, very sweet and lovng, hate you messed up thier first time with mom showing up, just hope she's understanding, we'll see in ch 2 I hope.

great

please continue ASAP

Beautifully Crafted Story

Please continue this story! It's absolutely wonderful and special.

It would be a crime

A crime if you didn't continue the storyline. Nice work on what you did, but that last sentence is all I can think about.

... and that's how Mom found us...

VERY cool! *W*...The sister seemed soooooooooooo into it. Wonder how/what the mom will say and react to? *W*

Keep writing! *S*

This is a Grrrreat one !!! ... I fully agree with all the responders here -- you MUST continue with ch.2 ,ch 3... and more !!!

awesome

this is one sexy awesome story!!! Lets hope mom is really horny. thanks

CONTINUE ! ---

With their school being named Robert E Lee, they might be cousins as well as brother and sister. I would almost bet "Mom" joins in.....

Wow, nice work

I absolutely agree that this is a chapter worthy story.
It would be a disservice to not continue it.
I'm hoping for long and interesting content. And of course plenty of teaching from mum.

Good story

Like it had good build up and a cool ending .Hope you do more with it .Gave it a 5 .

Please, please, PLEASE...

...tell me you're not buying in on that 'white privilege' crap and that everything Confederate is racist.

Next chapter ASAP.

And by ASAP, I mean like yesterday!!! Please do not make us wait like some of your past multi-chapter stories. By the way, no distracting mistakes in spelling, grammar, punctuation, etcetera.

Lacks originality.

A very familiar story and the family is just too good to be true.

Well Done Story

Calls for a sequel. Thanks

Wow!

that ending!

your choice of words unrealistic

She rolled onto her side, exposing her luscious front to me, grabbed my hand, and led it down to her mons.

Who says that???

No guy especially teen or 20 something would say that. The story was good up until that paragraph.

Gave you a 5 for effort

and content. Great story!!

nicely written

There's gotta be another story! What's the mom do?!

Great

One of the best, written by one of the BEST! Thank you for all your stories. Hope we don't wait long for Part two. *****

Needs a lot more work

I get the impression that the whole point of the story was so you could pull that surprise ending. The writing is good, and it started out with promise, but you didn't develop the character interaction and plot much before the fucking started. The wrestling with incest should just be a pun. You had the chance for real dramatic tensio , and let it slip away. Also, the sibs behavior in the bedroom had none of the flavor of the relationship you described between them at the start. One more thing: no one in high school builds up a nest egg by investing. Investing what? Paper route money? Anyway, don't give up on this. Rewrite it and spend some more time on it.

Now that is an ending!!

Nothing left to do but end the story. Perfect ending to a great story.

Mom slips quietly into the room

closes the door and says, "kids, there are some things you need to know".

that was a great story...well done

great story....you need to continue your writing

Sequel

Hope you continue this one. It should be very interesting where the storyline goes in light of what happened.

Holy Shit!

What a fantastic story! Excellent, realistic dialogue makes the sister so real I can feel her tongue in my ear right now. Awesome writing!

white privilege?

fuck off

Sensational.

Wow
Truly wonderful. I relate to Kait totally. While I have never wrestled with incest for real, I have wrestled with secret desires for my older brother as long as I remember. I am happy that others feel the same way. I long for even one night with him.
Amy
amyadamson648@yahoo.com

LOL

// by Anonymous white privilege?
fuck off //

Not everybody gets irony.

so much for not getting caught!

great story.hope there's a sequel.

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In Part 2, Mom is just standing there smiling! Mom confesses to the kids that she and their Father are not just their parents, but they, too, are Brother & Sister! After this, Mom strips and joins in the fuckfest....

Your story

Please explain who frock is Wilson you said his name was Mike Thomas pay attention to your writing

Great

I would like to see a part 2 to this story

Please, please keep at it

I'm so happy you're over your dry spell (we all suffered) and have reunited with your muse. Yours is a rare talent.

Great start !

I do hope part two isn't long in arriving !

This very hot !

A good story

A very good story... Really sweet.. Hope you don't ruin it with a second second part involving another person...
A big sister who loves you and only you, who's not another man's leftover.. And not just because she's a young girl, she's older than you, so she really did save herself for you...
What stories lack is just that.. People are happy with leftovers these days.. I hate it when stories contain shit like you're better than anyone I ever had..
A woman who has slept with more than one person in her entire life is a whore. And a story about a whore serves no purpose.. Better to watch porn if all you want is a whore..

Why???

Wonderful story . . . . love the two kids . . . . love their attitudes about each other and their love . . . love their irresistible mutual attraction . . . Why did you have to have mom catch them? If there is a Part 2, and I really hope there is, please turn mom into a guilty hallucination or something. These two deserve some very happy together time. Love your way with dialogue.

Damn Fine

Great characters. Great interactions. Only had the slightest dissonance hearing that an eighteen an nineteen year old were both still virgins.

That last line "And that's how Mom found us." made me burst out laughing!

If there's a sequel, I just hope it doesn't turn into a family fuck-fest...

A 2nd Chapter Please!

5*
Yes, I agree with the other readers. A 2nd Chapter Please! I also agree that it should stay siblings only. Mother can approve, but beyond that she should not participate.

I beg you do chapter 2!!!
Pretty pretty please!?!?