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One complaint
I hate having to wait for the next installment! With something this good, waiting for the next chapter is bordering on cruel and unusual punishment.
I,m sensing...
some kind of trouble from Tom.
Why do I have the feeling
There will soon be a knock on the door and an unwanted person asking for Amber?
Glad you didn't throw it away.
But why can't you release all the chapters at once? Honest question, not criticism... how hard is it to post a new chapter?
Absorbing
Very nice pace and development. Anxious to read more.
The Tension in romance has to come to the front.
Do you think that there is an all points out on her? Personally I know that something unpleasant has to create problems for the romance.
Something
is going to happen. I know how your stories go sometimes. Something very bad is going to happen.
Well,.....
..... as I have said for your other stories, I hope you enjoy your writing as much as your readers enjoy your works.
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