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The Perfect Pieces Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/31/15

One complaint

I hate having to wait for the next installment! With something this good, waiting for the next chapter is bordering on cruel and unusual punishment.

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by Rasmat07/31/15

I,m sensing...

some kind of trouble from Tom.

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by rightbank07/31/15

Why do I have the feeling

There will soon be a knock on the door and an unwanted person asking for Amber?

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by RPGer07/31/15

Glad you didn't throw it away.

But why can't you release all the chapters at once? Honest question, not criticism... how hard is it to post a new chapter?

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by Anonymous07/31/15

Absorbing

Very nice pace and development. Anxious to read more.

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by bruce2208/04/15

The Tension in romance has to come to the front.

Do you think that there is an all points out on her? Personally I know that something unpleasant has to create problems for the romance.

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by RB194703/15/16

Something

is going to happen. I know how your stories go sometimes. Something very bad is going to happen.

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by Horseman6802/03/17

Well,.....

..... as I have said for your other stories, I hope you enjoy your writing as much as your readers enjoy your works.

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