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All Comments on 'Naked at the Door Pt. 01'

by Icecubez

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nothing at the door

I rarely do this but don't quit your day job. Readers Digest would be more fitting for this lame train wreck story. Yawn!! The keyboard that bored. Pure "soft-on" material.

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 8 years ago
Interesting start

Well I liked it, hope to see what they have in mind for him. I'm going on FB rite now!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thumbs Down

Your story just went limp, and didn’t go anywhere! One of the worst I have seen here!

Which is saying something!

At least get a proof reader to see if anyone else will read it!

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