All Comments on 'The Perfect Pieces Ch. 05'

But if my aging memory is correct, you're well on your way to raising your own bar even higher. A great way to start an otherwise dreary, rainy day. Thank you.

wonderful chapter. This author is right up at the top on this site.

Your story continues to be both enjoying and tantalizing! The vivid life of your characters gives great depth and realism to the narrative. I, for one, am hoping for a "happily ever after" ending, despite the foreboding bits of information you have revealed about Amber's past. Great read--keep 'em coming!

Great prose...great passion...great promise...great question waiting!!!! Really enjoy your writing!!!

Teaser - I was hoping for a longer chapter.

While I dislike the length of this episode, I cannot deny that I cannot help refreshing Dreamclouds submission page hoping for a new installment. You rock man!

But if you think back over it you will conclude that the content was worth it.

and caring

but with a bit of foreboding. (cue the music)

I have been going through your library one story at a time and loving each and every one of them. This group of stories is really well done: pace of discovery for both people is well done, the use of art to define their growing love is great stuff. Looking forward to discovering more about these two people and how their love will grow.

Keep up the writing, you are an amazing author.

one of your classics, I suspect. A lot of your stories are about people finding themselves, one way or another.

There is quite a bit of story yet to go, so I won't know how it stacks up in comparison to your other works for a while.

Love so grand that it allows you to teach your love your craft, your art. While learning that you may be putting yourself in danger. Yet allowing yourself to remain open to her and her danger. Author, you weave a web that entangles we readers. Whatever, do not stop. LP

The romantic flavor of this story is undeniably vanilla at this point and it feels very believable. DreamCloud is skilled at describing sexual activity in a brief but effective manner. I think this is what keeps the story flowing so well.

Again, suspense - thank you.

Bunch of nonsense chapter after chapter, pity