All Comments on 'Miserable Company'

I loved it. Just, wow. I simply wish I was the one pleasing Maura. Please, love, etc.

"Robin Hood," in the Olde English, was not an interesting read either. Verbiage did not make this a more interesting read and wishing for a world like those of the past is a frivolous endeavor.

Thank you for posting this work of art. I enjoyed reading it very much! Your style of writing appears very sophisticated and the work laid out very well. I also enjoyed the unconventional setting of the story!

I say wow too. Really like this. Now for Chapter 2 - let Mr. be caught red-handed. Then the truce is struck - he can philander, but must allow the Mrs. and servant theirs as well. A little cuckholding. All private and such. No divorce. Separate bedrooms. Then let the two lovers find their peace and end their misery. Let joy spring forth in a confident truth.

Incredible story!! The writing, the attention to detail in this period piece from philosophies to women clothing, to the development of the characters is intricate perfection. Oh, the webs we weave! I'm looking forward to part 2.

SomethingWitchy indeed. Great work

A weird combination of HOT and SAD. Beautifully written with really well developed characters for such a short piece of work. The religious aspect was thought provoking, so thank you for that. I wish there wasn't such a finality to their misery, that you had left a door open for a better ending.

I would love to read more of your writing.

Your satory, as a story of a sexual encounter is very good.

For me (albeit a male) though, it is a brilliant illustration of why I, brought up as a Christian, am now a Pagan.

The Christian God is the biggest bastard, tyrant and hypocrite ever in recorded history.