Wonderful. Pussy rules--especially when she knows it. Keep this story going
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Anonymous11/21/15
Anonymous #2
First of all loved the story great job.
Second anonymous is just a hater who plays the role of pussy in his own life. Just ignore him.
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Anonymous11/21/15
it's ok
The story is written pretty well but it's a standard "i am the woman and you submit to me anyway no matter what i do"-story. I would have loved to see more struggle, maybe even have him win the first round and then she could lure him in for the second episode with the offer of 50 blowjobs, but he would have to wait for a week with masturbating after the end of this game and then make him her little puppy.
It's a nice idea, but pretty standard, you could have put more into it. It seems that most of the stories in the last time are this way.
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Wonderful. Pussy rules--especially when she knows it. Keep this story going
Anonymous #2
First of all loved the story great job.
Second anonymous is just a hater who plays the role of pussy in his own life. Just ignore him.
it's ok
The story is written pretty well but it's a standard "i am the woman and you submit to me anyway no matter what i do"-story. I would have loved to see more struggle, maybe even have him win the first round and then she could lure him in for the second episode with the offer of 50 blowjobs, but he would have to wait for a week with masturbating after the end of this game and then make him her little puppy.
It's a nice idea, but pretty standard, you could have put more into it. It seems that most of the stories in the last time are this way.
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