Flash fiction to a T! Love how your character development and growth flows within the intrigue of the story line. Great work (once again)!
Cant wait for the next 'installment'
cliptoe
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Anonymous07/30/15
ANOTHER GREAT STORY
I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STORIES AND THIS ONE IS STARTING OUT GREAT AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT INSTALLMENT.
Normally shorties like this drive nuts but this has me really intrigued. I just wish you allowed voting this definitely deserves a 5* rating. Next chapter soon please!
Definitely agree, I wish rating were enabled so I could give it the solid 5 it deserves. Please keep the story going, it seems like it's about to get really interesting.
mainly because I've found that in the past, on previous series, I've suffered from the capricious nature of some who choose to demean the creative work of others. Regarding feedback, the written response, however brief, is far more satisfying to any writer than the arbitrary choice of stars. So, thank you kind respondent, I appreciate you taking the time to support my work.
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Interesting
Interesting indeed.
This is interesting, hope we don't have to wait too long in between the chapters.
Beauty And Brains...
...and a one fun story. Cheers! --- Josie
Good, keep writing
fun
keep it going, I had fun with your other stories, have read them all more than once. This has the look of another good one.
Love how this is going
Flash fiction to a T! Love how your character development and growth flows within the intrigue of the story line. Great work (once again)!
Cant wait for the next 'installment'
cliptoe
ANOTHER GREAT STORY
I REALLY ENJOY YOUR STORIES AND THIS ONE IS STARTING OUT GREAT AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT INSTALLMENT.
love it
Great story
Normally shorties like this drive nuts but this has me really intrigued. I just wish you allowed voting this definitely deserves a 5* rating. Next chapter soon please!
Definitely agree, I wish rating were enabled so I could give it the solid 5 it deserves. Please keep the story going, it seems like it's about to get really interesting.
Why I don't allow voting...
mainly because I've found that in the past, on previous series, I've suffered from the capricious nature of some who choose to demean the creative work of others. Regarding feedback, the written response, however brief, is far more satisfying to any writer than the arbitrary choice of stars. So, thank you kind respondent, I appreciate you taking the time to support my work.
Great work
love your work. Please keep it coming.
More of the shorty please!!!!
More of the story please
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