All Comments on 'Rubber Ducky'

by AlexMakin

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
How do I Love Thee; Let Me Count the Ways

Interesting twist on the title. Calculated and highly effective bondage positioning and stimulation. Keep these stories cumming [or, in Alice's case, not cumming]

gentleoneexplorergentleoneexplorerover 8 years ago
Leave Her Bound Alone???

Perhaps she asked for this on his arrival home but this is more than she expected I would think. This is not right leaving her alone and going to relax. She could become permanently injured especially with the nipple clamps being left on too long. She was a fool to toss the ducky aside and he is cruel and sadist but that may be what she wants. However it is so dangerous to leave a person bound and alone and the damage that could be done is tremendously stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

You were too effective in developing his callousness and a victim frame of mind for her. By the time you revealed the twist, there is a negative view of him. The twist makes the reader miffed she acts the victim instead of owning it. Good job getting the reader invested in the story, even if we are not happy about it. You, author, get points off for for leaving someone alone who is so significantly bound.

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmover 7 years ago
Nice

Man and wife bondage play. No cuckold, etc. Perfect. Thanks.

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