by Codlingsby
Thanks, Piscator. I don't take any notice of anonymous abuse, don't worry. I like your stories, by the way - a similar style and approach.
C, honestly? Your fetishes do not overlap mine. However, this story was so well written from the Go, that I found even the sexual bits & bites to be interesting, though out of my experience.
In my opinion, your writing style is superb, your characters so engaging, your dialogue believable and the story unfolded in such a manner, I could actually imagine myself participating.
Well done Sir!
Ass for the annoyingmousie if the pathetic creature so disliked your writing, this spineless troll must be one of the spelunkers sending me death threats for the stories I post.
To quote The Great Sibelius: ""No one builds monuments to critics!"
Thank you, fanfare - I'm glad it came across so well. I find erotica much more arousing and effective if it seems to be within the bounds of believability, if it feels as if it just might - might - actually happen. Because who knows...?
Oooh, I've just come across this story late in the day! You're spot on, Codlingsby. This might just about happen, especially in that city.
Interesting writing style, staccato perhaps, economic and erotic certainly.
Nice one!