Falling for the First Time Ch. 01

Not Bad

This story has great potential, keep it up!

Good start

I'm looking forward to reading more
Chapters in this story. You've done a good job setting up the characters. Please keep writing.

Like It!

Agree with Anon, a good start - looking fwd to what comes next.

Not Many Mature Virgin Stories...

...on Loterotica. Jaz is a believable character, and so is her virginity. How she loses it will be a great second, or third chapter! Opening flower stories are in short supply here.

I like the start of this. Like others have said, Jaz is a very authentic and relateable character, and your writing is so clean and consistent so it's easy to follow along and exciting to follow along, more importantly. I can't wait for more chapters!

P.S. That last anon comment was mine since I wasn't logged in for whatever reason lol

An excellent beginning...

For what I hope becomes a very good multi-chapter story.

Already Loving It

When are you gonna post the next chapter?

Thank you!

Your comments are much appreciated. I hope to get the 2nd chapter up by sometime next week!

Stick around :)

Great start!!!!! Looking forward to more!!!!

Missed this one earlier.

Missed this story the first go around, came back to it when I saw the second story. Nice writing, decent development, the sex was just right in the mix of the plot. I would be Leery of any guy whose bad attitude surfaces so easily. He was having a bad day, that should not allow him to be a dick. Watch out for him. The true test of a person is how they act towards others while under stress! Keep up the great writing though!

Miss Summer

I like your work; a lot.

G

Very enjoyable.

You are a good writer. Just enough daydreams interspersed to keep it interesting. Looking forward to future chapters.

Wonderful start to the story. Looking forward to more.

Love it

Love it