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by Ashesh907/31/15

Piscator , this is a spatial & really as today's third new poem's title suggests .....

There's an Art to it !!!
" I nestle my erection
against the crack of your ass "
these 2 lines call out to the Bottom lover in me as much as the Full Moon calls out to the souls of howling pack wolves !!!!!
5-ed

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