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Eyes Wide Open

byErinBrockovich©
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by shang4007/30/15

कचकचीत संभोग

Thanks for recommendations
Absolutely hot story of father making her His

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by lemonheads07/30/15

I liked it. Job well done for a first story. I would love to read what happens next if you chose to continue this story.

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by UAlbanyGirl51808/01/15

liked it

the story was okay, but a little rushed, and the tense change midway through was very distracting. more build up would have been nice too.

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by Anonymous08/03/15

Well

Well that escalated quickly! Better than many though, better than many.

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by Parkier10/17/16

Where's the Pain?

The vast majority of girls/women experience considerable pain when their hymen is broken. In your story Jesdica had no reaction st all.

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