All Comments on 'Rainy Afternoons'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Warm, sexy

Really nice, well-written, human, sexy. But what woman (or man) calls her pussy a "sex"? She's fucking her two flatmates, at the same time, and you think she's too embarrassed to call it a pussy or a cunt? These are both warm, exciting, sexy words in this context. "He made love to her sex" is just nonsense - it killed the story.

dianaprince_73dianaprince_73over 17 years ago
Nice read on a rainy night

Well, it was a perfect read for a rainy night. Made me wish for two male roommates, lol. Well done!

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