Just Being Neighbourly

Fantastic

Love the fact that Dan found a new play partner hope you have more to add
EDD8

Great

Loved the story. Hope there is more to come

Damn shes a hottie !!!!

What a great story it is the first one of yours I have read so I plan on reading the others you have written.
5 stars and please continue this it needs to be longer.

Another great story which is mildly irritating as i dont know which one i want a follow up chapter too.

Brilliant!!

Definitely need a few more chapters like this one

Definately need more

It came to an end too quickly for a only chapter.

I really enjoyed this story. Could definitely do with a second chapter.

Please, sir, can we have some more?

Exciting and hot, and so well-written! Vivid characters and realistic dialogue and actions (I'm a do-it-your-selfer, and even your plumbing descriptions were spot on!). I would be delighted to read more of Dan and Karen, and would not object to a true romance between them, despite the age difference. Thank you!

More please

I do believe that you've had enough rest. May we have some more?

More Karen & Dave

Well done. Another chapter would be appreciated.

Well done!

Nicely written. Very realistic. Good buildup. Keep up the good work!

Please continue

I found your story to be both possible from a realism standpoint and a very enjoyable read. You do a very good job keeping it clear and correct grammatically, and hot and heavy sexually. I would love to see you continue, possibly you could bring us the information of what Karen's sister-in-law thinks about another man finding his way into her life, and the s-i-l's attempt to insure that Karen isn't going to be hurt.

More.........

.......please!!!

Love to see more

Yes please many ways for you to go hope to see more

Well written and......

so memory inspiring! I've been with 3 women who had the same talent, that being spraying me with fluids, whether from eating or fucking them, and I find it so exciting, just like in this story. The fact that the woman in this story also loves ass play makes the story even better. Another episode, please!

Awesome

Another fantastic sstory!! Thanks for sharing!
Cheers

Great

I really have liked reading yours and hope u keep writing and either make more of them or new ones

"I" !!!

I should be so lucky - - - -but,but wait a minute - - - oh yeah," I was" !!!

We need more!

Please continue this series. There's definite promise here, and I want to see where the story goes.

impatiently waiting

for the next chapter,,,,,,,,,,,,,soon I hope.
5 star tale

Nice!

Great beginning to another storyline. Interested in how they manage the age difference. Nice twist since it's usually the guy that is older.

Sex. sure...

But when it happens it HAPPENS! No real buildup. No real foreplay. They're just into it (no pun intended) 100%.

What's the rush?

Great Fun to read !

And let me add, Plumbing and Sex are quite an old connection. Much older even then the following Limerick, which I found in a more than 100 y.o. collection:

There was a young plumber of Lee
who was plumbing a girl by the sea.
Said the girl: Someone's coming!
Said the plumber, still plumbing:
If anyone's coming, it's me!

Well plugged!

Very well-written story. Very believable, and very sexy. I look forward to reading the rest of your submissions.

Just Being Neighbourly

Great job. I thought the pace and the timing were terrific.
I see no real rush when it's been a year. A night? A week? Who's anonymous 9/18/15 kidding?

Hygiene

Pussy first then arse, not the other way round.

This was fantastic

You have a new fan.

Wow

Loved this story. Was cumming halfway through the story.

Yummy!

So very good! Please add to this story! Thank you!

Beautiful story!

Refreshing and original. Can't wait to read more!

that was fun

and I am glad to see there are more parts to read.

It's Fantasy But

Ass to pussy is just YECH!