Your story just gets better and better. You are a master of dialogue. Like SMC, I was really taken by Amber's "I've already fallen" line. Masterful! I know that there will be some nail biting scenes to come, but I am happily awaiting more chapters. Thank you!
..... and ingenious dialogue between these two absorbing characters. Coming to this story so late gives me the advantage of quickly moving to the next chapter -- which I am doing now.
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Another wonderful chapter
From a master of romance.
Love their banter...
"I stopped falling last night," Amber stated as she picked up her bag, "let me know when you catch up."
That's awesome, made me grin...
Man, this is a great story.
Another great segment!
Your story just gets better and better. You are a master of dialogue. Like SMC, I was really taken by Amber's "I've already fallen" line. Masterful! I know that there will be some nail biting scenes to come, but I am happily awaiting more chapters. Thank you!
winter may be over
but I suspect it will be a turbulent spring.
So far a delightful romance
but there are some dark clouds on the horizon. He may believe that he is invulnerable, but-------
You do
have a way with words. I'll bet he will prevail but end up in a hospital.
Exceptional.....
..... and ingenious dialogue between these two absorbing characters. Coming to this story so late gives me the advantage of quickly moving to the next chapter -- which I am doing now.
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