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Sitting on Daddy's Lap

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/30/16

Absolutely amazing

Loved it plzzzzzz don't stop writing

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by Anonymous02/13/16

amazing

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by mike250102/14/16

Oh, to have his wife and daughters! ;)

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Ashlynn whispered to me. "Take your shorts off daddy, I want the cock that made me to fill me.
She gasped and whispered in my ear "Daddy, it's so big. I've never had one that big in my teenage cunt. I don't know if it will fit, but I wanna try."
""

Fuck. Me. ....daaaamn! I want her for my daughter! Hell I want two or three of her!!
...and I love that the dad isnt being a resistant douche like in so many stories, that is so annoying!! ;)

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When her words penetrated the fog of lust and alcohol shrouding my brain, I swelled with pride. I knew I wasn't unusually large, but what man doesn't want to be told he's has the biggest dick his partner has ever seen.
""

Too true! Lol. Huge emotional and ego boost, especially in the horny-kinky corner ;)

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I was fighting not to cum too soon. I didn't want to explode before I had time to really enjoy the first teenage pussy I would slide into since I was a teen myself.
""

Damn, that would suck having a dick that is too sensitive and blowing early, lol.

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She grabbed my dick more firmly, and began to lower herself. I gasped as I was enveloped in her velvety warm wet slit. She paused and lifted herself up a bit leaving only the head inside her. With a loud sigh she lowered herself taking my entire shaft.
""

Well doesnt appear as though she had any trouble taking it, lol!

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"What I want isn't on the menu of any drive thru!" I reply. My daughter giggled and her pussy muscles squeezed my dick as she continued to rock her hips.

"Well when we get home, maybe that can be on the menu." My wife says
""

I love how theyre totally comfortable talking sex with the daughter in the csr!

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I climbed up her body and she smiled at me and said "Daddy, Dave got called out of town on business on our wedding night. Since you are my favorite man in the whole wide world, I decided to spend my wedding night with you."
I shuddered at how much her voice sounded like Kelli's. I didn't respond for fear my voice would betray my thoughts, she whispered in my ear "I won't be mad but I always wondered...did you ever fuck Kelli?"
My cock grew as she said that in my ear, and I drove it home. "OH God daddy. You're so big...bigger than Dave. It feels so good daddy." I began to furiously thrust into Missy picturing Kelli wearing the exact same lingerie my wife was wearing.
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Fuuuuuuuuck!! I love his wife!! ;). Thats a woman that knows her man, loves to make him happy, and feels ultimately comfortable with herself in the relationship! Wow. :)

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She has a bit of an Electra Complex
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Freud was such a douche, lol.

Wow, that was a great story, helluva ride! Hehehe ;). I cant believe we havent seen any more chapters pop up with this one! :)

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by DebbieX03/19/16

Some weird anatomy

You said. "a pillow was stopping me from putting the tab into the buckle. I was about to say something when I realized that the pillow was actually my daughters breast."
How low do Ashlynn breasts. hang? If she's sitting on her fathers lap and her breast is in the way of the seatbelt buckle, they must be hanging to her knees.

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by auhunter0403/27/16

Have to wonder

Don't these driver's have senses of smell and hearing? lol

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by cslt04/10/16

Excellent!

Great story, interesting twists.

Thank you!

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by curiousmommy4704/14/16

family love

loved this story I had a simmer thing happen only it was with my son & daughter bringing my daughter home from collage car so full she had sit on her brothers lap she was wearing a very short skirt son in shorts. it was a 4 hr. drive we were all in front boxes so just see there heads little did they know there was a small space between to boxes. I caught a movement daughter lifting her skirt up no panties. saw her pull down brothers shorts there his big cock was standing nice n tall hard to drive & watch daughter sitting down on her brothers big cock then the smell of sex hitting my nose. I got to watch her jack his cock off on her pussy & stomach I puled into a rest area as soon as car stopped I reach threw opening taking hold of sons cock. telling them I will join them when get home

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by cubbies4vrs04/26/16

Good damn story

A good version of the other side but dont leave us hanging we need more.

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by Olddog1305/25/16

Nice start on a great story-line

I have read stories like this before, but they didn't have the depth of feeling and sex that you have Ldy_Sea. I would love to read more in this series, if it becomes one. It's really a hot read !!

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by Anonymous05/27/16

Amazing you should write more

I agree with the comment below that you have written the best of this theme. I want to read more. Does he get Kelli too? Does she get the sons and Dave? Does she find out or does everyone slink about?

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by newtype252506/26/16

Agreed! Amazing! Epic!

More required! Thank you! And I can't wait to read more from you very soon!

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by Anonymous07/05/16

Fifth time reading it.

I love to come back to this story every few months. Mostly, to see if a part 2 has come out yet. But partly also because the story is THAT DAMN HOT! I love all the nitpickers going on about grammar and plausibility. 1) there are stories on here where the grammar is so atrocious you'd think a 10 year old wrote it. 2) this isn't English lit, it's erotic lit. 3) it's a fantasy story sight. Arguing about the plausibility is hilarious on a site that features sci-fi erotica and werewolves, and vampires, etc.

5 stars!

Take your time but please do a follow up. You've foreshadowed a threesome with Ashlynn and the mom as well as opened the door for the dad to fuck his favorite dsughter (perhaps a threesome with Ash as well) and the mom with her sons!

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by Anonymous07/09/16

More PLEASE!!

Great story. Waiting on next chapter.

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by Anonymous07/13/16

Very nice but little issues

I gave this 4 stars. As much as I really liked it couldn't give 5 stars because of small issues I noticed. The main one being you kept jumping back and forth from present tense to past. "I say..." and later "I said...". I first noticed it near very beginning "My wife refrains from..." and "I joked with my wife" I couldn't help noticing it and obviously I couldn't get over it. Still Great story great skill and very erotic.

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by Anonymous08/09/16

More please

Loved it.

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by Anonymous09/14/16

So good

Amazing story.

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by Anonymous10/17/16

So sexy

Yes I'm a woman and had the best orgasm reading it.

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by Anonymous02/27/17

Hope

A great story and a great series in the making i hope.

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