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Zoha's Day In

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by Anonymous08/05/15

Excellent start to hopefully a long series

The name reminds me of a star on a "do IT yourself" video site I used to frequent- dusky voluptuous middle eastern beauty - thanks for the flashback

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by thestralburst08/05/15

Thank-you for the positive comment Anonymous. Means a lot.
I'd definitely like to continue writing a series if ideas come to mind.

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