Wrong Urges

Its good but

give them more times even if there are in puplic it dosnet have to be so fast

You need a proof reader

Lots of typos in this story which puts the reader off ie. a few ones when it should have been on etc. etc.

Older Brother

Son needs to ask if Mom gave older brother same treatment.

Lots of potential

But the editing is paramount.
I do hope you continue.

Too easy

Proof reader is an understatement and the incest happened way too easily IMHO. *

nice

good story. I swear incest would never happen if there were no pools, hot tubs or sun tan oil to be applied!

I was envisioning Sophia Varga as the main character, which made it hotter.

and did u mean to imply that mom may have been fucking the older brother before he left home? might make for a nice follow up chapter with some hot DP action!

Great story ....... HOT, arousing and needs more details and when they get home; more testing of each others skills !!! KIt seems Mom's little boy isn't little anymore :) Cannot wait for more and thank you !!

an excellent story that demands a sequel

A great progression, from the son eyeing his mother's camel toe and mom teasing him about how the sight got him big and hard in his pants to balls-out down and dirty motherfucking. I love the joking and banter as the couple gets hotter and hotter, the kid with the biggest hard on of his life, his mother with a river streaming down her ass and legs. After the kid blows his balls in his own mother's mouth: "That was a lot of cum sweetie, luckily mommy is here to milk your cock." "And lucky for you, your big boy is here to take care of his mother." It is just so cool when a mother compliments her kid on how much sperm he's got in his hot young balls and he calls himself her "big boy" and calls her his "mommy." Look, if a mother and son can't let themselves go with each other, let their hair down and act like rutting animals, who the fuck can? Both are aware every second that the boy came of that wonderful hole between his mother's legs as a tiny baby but he ain't so tiny anymore. He's big and strong and he's grown a big fat mommy-pleaser between his own legs and a pair of heavy loaded balls that never quit. The kid's got plenty of the creamy semen his mother craves in those young balls of his. So he gives his mommy the hot incestuous fuck they both desire, he unloads his balls and shoots her full of his sperm. As they leave, he watches proud and grinning as his sperm leaks down his own mother's legs, one of the best things a son can ever see. Perfect, just perfect.

Grammer

To those critiquing my writing and my lack of editing and proofreading, I am working harder to proofread multiple times as I see its effect how people read my work. I hope you all continue to read and give me your honest opinion of my work. Thank you.

Could have been even better with more of a build up!

Mom son story needs a lot of build up to be credible.

A one pager for start and consummation of a mom son relationship does not really work.

"I was not going to play point guard for a division 3-school upstate"

What's the point of this sentence? There were just too many of this kind of errors to make this a good read. Proof read better or get help from an editor. ***

5 stars

Loved it, love to see more!

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A nice jack-off fantasy, short & sweet: 4*!

The scene where he applies sunscreen oil all over his mom's body is priceless. I was imagining my mother on the beach in her bikini.

Pretty good story but I'm like some of the others in preferring more of a build up.