All Comments on 'Aunt Jan's Hot Tub'

Good story. A good stroke story, but there are a few errors in it. You should try using an editor. I do and it has kept me from making silly mistakes and actually improved my writing.

If you don't have an editor, try reading it aloud and your mistakes will appear. Good story.

This story starts well but needs help. Keep trying, I love a good cfnm story and this one could be developed. The incest angle adds an extra touch for me because I've had a crush on my cousin forever and would love to "act out" with her and her friends.