All Comments on 'Humanity 2.0, Year 146, Day 181'

by adrammalech

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well done!

It's been a while since you ppsted anything and I'm really glad to see that you're back and, as I stated, well done! Chalk up another well written chapter! Can't wait to read the next!

OldComputerHandOldComputerHandover 8 years ago
Missing chapter?

I have a chapter called "Year 130, Day 71" saved on my PC for this story. That chapter doesn't show up here on Literotica or on mcstories, so I'm not sure where I found it. Is it a valid part of this story, or did you possibly withdraw it?

Really enjoying the story. I only wish there wasn't such a long time between postings. Seems like almost as long as the internal time gaps in the story itself :-(

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenover 8 years ago
God.

The story. Everything is done so well and powerfully. Haven't literally cried from reading a simple paragraph in a while, a long while. Usually takes so much more buildup to start, but just that one line was enough.

adrammalechadrammalechover 8 years agoAuthor
Update

Thanks all for reading. Was worried that I'd taken too long to update and people wouldn't even remember the story existed. Hopefully won't be two years until the next update again.

OldComputerHand - Year 130, Day 71 - Thank you for noticing - and yes, I did withdraw that chapter. While I don't think I botched the chapter itself, the overall plot arc it was meant to begin was something I didn't flesh out enough beforehand, and the more thought I put into the second arc the more I realized I wanted to go in another direction with it - so I took that chapter down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I love this story.

I have been waiting for this for a long time & glad to see a new chapter. I reread it from the beginning too. Please keep writing!

icebreadicebreadover 8 years ago
Next

Soon please.

alternavealternaveover 8 years ago
woot

Glad to see that this series is not dead! Keep em comin!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
? Where are you?

Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

amazing story.

Started reading for the sex, continued reading for the plot.

Hope this will be updated some time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great Series

This is hands down one of the most fascinating stories I have come across. I hope to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
finish it would make a good movie

finish it would make a good movie

cmsheaffcmsheaffover 6 years ago
Very inventive

I love this story. I think you need to get us to the mass extinction tho.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please come back

So I read this story when you were first writing it and loved every bit of it. Is there any chance you'll be coming back to this particular story to finish it off. I've literally read through what's here a dozen times hoping each time there may be a new installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Need an Ending

One more chapter to wrap things up?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I knew it couldn't be finished but it still hurts to see that it's been 7 years. Thanks for writing this, was a delight.

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