Curt, stertorous and totally unbelievable. First time lovers be they lesbian or no would never act in this defiling manner of sudden abandonment to an initial excursion into sex. Virginal moments normally hold a much more romantically nervous coming together of two, even two mutually wanting, individuals. The perfect storm of nervous approach and wanting acceptance would never be encountered in the grimy, filthy hollows of a public loo. "Yuck!"
The actual sexuality sounded more as though it was written by a man in that smacked of "Wham, bang, thank you mamm!"
Sorry, but this held no sense of reality for me.
I'm sorry Bridrel, this was not a stand out story for me but I applaude you for sharing this true story with us. Seeing as how this is your first story, I want you to know I respect your effort and I'd like to encourage you to write more. All the best
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Long way to go!
Curt, stertorous and totally unbelievable. First time lovers be they lesbian or no would never act in this defiling manner of sudden abandonment to an initial excursion into sex. Virginal moments normally hold a much more romantically nervous coming together of two, even two mutually wanting, individuals. The perfect storm of nervous approach and wanting acceptance would never be encountered in the grimy, filthy hollows of a public loo. "Yuck!"
The actual sexuality sounded more as though it was written by a man in that smacked of "Wham, bang, thank you mamm!"
Sorry, but this held no sense of reality for me.
That was hott!!
I like reading about people's fantasies coming true. You should do more "base on a true story" type of stories :).
I'm sorry Bridrel, this was not a stand out story for me but I applaude you for sharing this true story with us. Seeing as how this is your first story, I want you to know I respect your effort and I'd like to encourage you to write more. All the best
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