You've managed to create an insanely self-centered, completely out of touch narcissist that puts all SS06 female protagonists to shame. Well done. I couldn't care less about this character if she drowned newborn puppies as a hobby. What, there's more to come? Gee, can't wait to see how she tries to make it his fault.
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Anonymous08/07/15
I'm confused.
She had to tell hubby about Glenn because she couldn't bring herself to lie to him, but she never told him about the four other guys because she would never do anything to hurt him.
The others didn't do it for her, but she thought Glenn might? She thought the others must also be "little" guys, but she then says she had experienced the 6 - 8 in variety. That's not small.
Do you even pay attention to what you're writing?
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Anonymous08/07/15
people
Need to seriously chill out.
It's just a story ffs, some of the neanderthals on here have the most tenuous grip on reality.
but, then I do love fantasy. Oh well, the thing that bothers me is the conflict about honesty. Why did she tell on this one and not on the others? She sounds as if she escaped from an SS06 story!
Fucking cunt whore. She cheated with five different men during the course of their short marriage. What the fuck did she expect? So now she regret's it. Awwweee.
She is not only a cheating cunt but a stupid one also. He did the right thing.
no rating until the end
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Anonymous08/08/15
3*s
Pleasant read. 3*s . Looks like it may rain today.
Thanks Carvohi .
AMerryman
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Anonymous08/08/15
Good Start
Looking forward to your next installment. Thus far the only thing that she seems to be sorry about really is that Caden didn't just "lay down" and accept her "news" and just go on like nothing had happened.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Anonymous08/11/15
Who is the target audience?
I stopped reading at the part where the husband admits that the only way that he can give his wife orgasm is with his tongue.
I haven't done a poll, but I believe that most guys are fine in the dick department. My advice for the author: Aim for a larger target audience than the pathetic pity seeking little weenies. Also Cuck stories get lame if the cucks can't do their jobs and therefore must rely on other men to help them out. There is no injustice, no antagonism to make you want to keep reading. There is just sadness, and pity for the cucks.
She can't love him she cheated 4 times before that than tells him how big and exciting his giant dick is and how she's going back for more the next night. What kind of dumb cunt would think that's ok . Would it be ok for her if his said her hole was to loose or her tits were to small or she doesn't like anal so he was gonna find someone else to fill that void. People shouldn't marry if they think something so major will be a problem in their marriage. Your spouse is a whole package of body and mind not just a dick or tits and ass.
You've picked the wrong genre. This is the 'Loving Wives' sector, and it's a little different over here. Try somewhere else, and you'll get what you're looking for.
Jedd Clampett
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Anonymous04/21/16
Writing is good.
But this whore is fucking stupid and I hate cuck stories.
This isn't a cuck story yet, but close.
by
Anonymous06/09/16
Good Story and as usual trolls !!!
A sexy and well written story. Thank you for submitting it,
As usual the haters are out, why do they read stories in this category ?
Maybe they get off on it then rant, oh well, please keep writing. I loved it.
How can this cum slut claim she loves him "unquestioningly"? His penis size was in question. I'm trying to figure out why did she marry him knowing full well he had a tiny dick and she wasn't going to stay faithful? It just makes no sense. To love a person "unquestioningly" is to love EVERYTHING about them --his tiny penis included. I also didn't care for the sluts disrepectful attitude. Continuously telling the man he has a small dick over and over and over agin isn't showing love or respect for him. This slut never once thought it might not be his dick that's too tiny --but her pussy that's too loose and worn the fuck out from these 12" cocks she was accustomed to. I'm not liking the weak husband. He needs to stop crying and count his blessings. This slut didn't even wait 7 years only waited 3years before her twat started pulsating over a penis that wasn't attached to her hubby. I don't understand why he married her knowing she had no intention of staying faithful? It just makes no sense. Why put yourself through that knowing the outcome was going to hurt you?
Regarding the previous comment, why would HE marry her? As soon as she started with the comments he should have been gone.
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Anonymous02/17/17
My wife's ex had a big dick...
..strike that, a huge dick. Mine is big but his, according to my wife, was very very large. Not only that he popped her cherry with it and pounded her for a couple years.
We married after he cheated and she went on the market. I'd known her forever, even went out a few times, but that was while her cherry was intact.
The first few years were good but the fly in the ointment was Tom's cock dipping into my wife's ointment when a truck broke down where I worked and we were sent home early. The grunting was coming from the spare room and that's where I found she wasn't lying about his cock. I'm about 7 1/2" and pretty thick, but what he was pummeling her pussy with, looked like it should be used during baseball season.
My bags were packed and I was going through the living room when they both happened to walk out of the spare room, naked. Jody screamed, started to hide, and then realized what I was carrying. She chased me to the door, begging me not to leave. Once she realized she would be outside naked if she continued to hold on, she let me go.
Emails, texts and phone messages inundated me. Rather than answer, I had her served at work. That didn't go over well with our friends, her family or even mine. "Can't you work it out?" Fuck no! She obviously had too much worked into her.
Now years later, I barely speak with my family and the last time I stopped by this past Christmas, they had invited Jody. When I walked in and she was helping my mom in the kitchen, I walked out. They made their choice and I'm done.
English
folks this in only chapter 1
this author has a loooooong a proven history of RAAC super wimps and resolved plot conflicts.
Ok, so the wife is a ditz...
But do you really not know women like this? Story seems to be progressing nicely.
well
great writing as usual.
Man, you've written her as a cold uncaring selfish girl.
To belittle him about penis size while confessing cheating and to say you cheated because he wasnt endowed/man enough to satisfy you?
Thats cold.
Keep em coming.
Your First Comments
Revealed too much about the ending. Not my cup of tea.
cardboard characters
A good precept but the characters dont live. the wife evidently has rocks for brains.
Wow
You've managed to create an insanely self-centered, completely out of touch narcissist that puts all SS06 female protagonists to shame. Well done. I couldn't care less about this character if she drowned newborn puppies as a hobby. What, there's more to come? Gee, can't wait to see how she tries to make it his fault.
I'm confused.
She had to tell hubby about Glenn because she couldn't bring herself to lie to him, but she never told him about the four other guys because she would never do anything to hurt him.
The others didn't do it for her, but she thought Glenn might? She thought the others must also be "little" guys, but she then says she had experienced the 6 - 8 in variety. That's not small.
Do you even pay attention to what you're writing?
people
Need to seriously chill out.
It's just a story ffs, some of the neanderthals on here have the most tenuous grip on reality.
As always interesting
but, then I do love fantasy. Oh well, the thing that bothers me is the conflict about honesty. Why did she tell on this one and not on the others? She sounds as if she escaped from an SS06 story!
Damn
Fucking cunt whore. She cheated with five different men during the course of their short marriage. What the fuck did she expect? So now she regret's it. Awwweee.
She is not only a cheating cunt but a stupid one also. He did the right thing.
no rating until the end
3*s
Pleasant read. 3*s . Looks like it may rain today.
Thanks Carvohi .
AMerryman
Good Start
Looking forward to your next installment. Thus far the only thing that she seems to be sorry about really is that Caden didn't just "lay down" and accept her "news" and just go on like nothing had happened.
Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Who is the target audience?
I stopped reading at the part where the husband admits that the only way that he can give his wife orgasm is with his tongue.
I haven't done a poll, but I believe that most guys are fine in the dick department. My advice for the author: Aim for a larger target audience than the pathetic pity seeking little weenies. Also Cuck stories get lame if the cucks can't do their jobs and therefore must rely on other men to help them out. There is no injustice, no antagonism to make you want to keep reading. There is just sadness, and pity for the cucks.
to the anon 'target audience'
you stopped too soon.
She can't love him she cheated 4 times before that than tells him how big and exciting his giant dick is and how she's going back for more the next night. What kind of dumb cunt would think that's ok . Would it be ok for her if his said her hole was to loose or her tits were to small or she doesn't like anal so he was gonna find someone else to fill that void. People shouldn't marry if they think something so major will be a problem in their marriage. Your spouse is a whole package of body and mind not just a dick or tits and ass.
gave you a 5 for your effort ansd story content.
and to help offset the asshole annony vote. This bobble fat hates everything.
wimp
I didn't read this, but since ALL carvohi's stories end the same way you still get 1* for your wimpiness.
5 to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote
good LW story
So boring
This is a site for SEX stories -- not for wannabe novelists. zzzzzzzzzzzz
To the anon "So Boring"
About sex stories...
You've picked the wrong genre. This is the 'Loving Wives' sector, and it's a little different over here. Try somewhere else, and you'll get what you're looking for.
Jedd Clampett
Writing is good.
But this whore is fucking stupid and I hate cuck stories.
This isn't a cuck story yet, but close.
Good Story and as usual trolls !!!
A sexy and well written story. Thank you for submitting it,
As usual the haters are out, why do they read stories in this category ?
Maybe they get off on it then rant, oh well, please keep writing. I loved it.
Good Start
Excellent beginning. Could go several different ways. I like that.
Why did she marry him?
How can this cum slut claim she loves him "unquestioningly"? His penis size was in question. I'm trying to figure out why did she marry him knowing full well he had a tiny dick and she wasn't going to stay faithful? It just makes no sense. To love a person "unquestioningly" is to love EVERYTHING about them --his tiny penis included. I also didn't care for the sluts disrepectful attitude. Continuously telling the man he has a small dick over and over and over agin isn't showing love or respect for him. This slut never once thought it might not be his dick that's too tiny --but her pussy that's too loose and worn the fuck out from these 12" cocks she was accustomed to. I'm not liking the weak husband. He needs to stop crying and count his blessings. This slut didn't even wait 7 years only waited 3years before her twat started pulsating over a penis that wasn't attached to her hubby. I don't understand why he married her knowing she had no intention of staying faithful? It just makes no sense. Why put yourself through that knowing the outcome was going to hurt you?
Second time through
Regarding the previous comment, why would HE marry her? As soon as she started with the comments he should have been gone.
My wife's ex had a big dick...
..strike that, a huge dick. Mine is big but his, according to my wife, was very very large. Not only that he popped her cherry with it and pounded her for a couple years.
We married after he cheated and she went on the market. I'd known her forever, even went out a few times, but that was while her cherry was intact.
The first few years were good but the fly in the ointment was Tom's cock dipping into my wife's ointment when a truck broke down where I worked and we were sent home early. The grunting was coming from the spare room and that's where I found she wasn't lying about his cock. I'm about 7 1/2" and pretty thick, but what he was pummeling her pussy with, looked like it should be used during baseball season.
My bags were packed and I was going through the living room when they both happened to walk out of the spare room, naked. Jody screamed, started to hide, and then realized what I was carrying. She chased me to the door, begging me not to leave. Once she realized she would be outside naked if she continued to hold on, she let me go.
Emails, texts and phone messages inundated me. Rather than answer, I had her served at work. That didn't go over well with our friends, her family or even mine. "Can't you work it out?" Fuck no! She obviously had too much worked into her.
Now years later, I barely speak with my family and the last time I stopped by this past Christmas, they had invited Jody. When I walked in and she was helping my mom in the kitchen, I walked out. They made their choice and I'm done.
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