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My wide adoring lips

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by greenmountaineer08/05/15

Never thought I'd read about a BJ in a villanelle. Just what I needed with my morning cup a joe.

Nicely done, Alina

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by greenmountaineer08/05/15

PS

Just thought of it. Great title. Every guy secretly desires "girth," right? Of course, it'll go over the head of some.

Forget I wrote that; poor choice of words(LOL)

Seriously, the title was smartly done.

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by Ashesh908/05/15

Thanx to GM's reco in PFD threads , i chanced upon this Masterpiece of

submissive masochism !!! Wow !!! 5-ed....'n Fave-ed ....

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by AlinaX08/05/15

Thanks for reading and commenting! :-)
Hmm... A thick cock that goes over my head? There's an idea with some weight to it.

I remember once, long ago, reading a story (possibly true) about a man with a 3-inch-thick cock. Finding a woman willing and able to accept it was so troublesome he resorted to a doll for regular satisfaction.

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by Piscator08/11/15

and then there are the nether lips

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by lorencino08/13/15

The title

The title didn't register until I read the comments above. However, the repetition of
“come, come between my wide adoring lips”
resonated more boldly every time I read it. It works so wonderfully in this poem.

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by zamm08/14/15

bravo!

Methinks you have read some ee Cummings. he would be proud.

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by AlinaX08/15/15

Lip Service

Thank you all for your kind comments. This poem owes more to Dylan Thomas than EE Cummings, unfortunately.

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by tazz31708/15/15

WOULD THAT BE

labia major or minor. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by AlinaX08/15/15

Why limit the imagination?

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