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Never thought I'd read about a BJ in a villanelle. Just what I needed with my morning cup a joe.
Nicely done, Alina
PS
Just thought of it. Great title. Every guy secretly desires "girth," right? Of course, it'll go over the head of some.
Forget I wrote that; poor choice of words(LOL)
Seriously, the title was smartly done.
Thanx to GM's reco in PFD threads , i chanced upon this Masterpiece of
submissive masochism !!! Wow !!! 5-ed....'n Fave-ed ....
Thanks for reading and commenting! :-)
Hmm... A thick cock that goes over my head? There's an idea with some weight to it.
I remember once, long ago, reading a story (possibly true) about a man with a 3-inch-thick cock. Finding a woman willing and able to accept it was so troublesome he resorted to a doll for regular satisfaction.
and then there are the nether lips
The title
The title didn't register until I read the comments above. However, the repetition of
“come, come between my wide adoring lips”
resonated more boldly every time I read it. It works so wonderfully in this poem.
bravo!
Methinks you have read some ee Cummings. he would be proud.
Lip Service
Thank you all for your kind comments. This poem owes more to Dylan Thomas than EE Cummings, unfortunately.
WOULD THAT BE
labia major or minor. TK U MLJ LV NV
Why limit the imagination?
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