MIL Fills In

Where is the build up

Sorry I didn't enjoy it... The story line was missing. It's like I skipped the first couple of pages..... It needs a little build up and back story

Needs more

I kind of enjoyed this story, but it needs more filling. You mentioned the wife and the neighbor. I hope future episodes, if there are any, are more complete.

Stupid

All that for just a...

All that for just a handjob and a finger. Lame! *

gave it a 5 for your content of sotry and effort

eat shit dear annony and lick assholes.

Incest is.................

Relations between people closely related by blood not LAW. How can you write when you don't even understand the basic definition of what you're writing about. 1*

To gordo12

This category is incest AND taboo. MIL falls into the taboo category.

Regardless the story still sucked.

Nice short story

MILs that have done similar often justify by thinking they are helping save the marriage. Pregnant wife sometimes is catalyst.

4

Good first effort. On this site, in-laws qualify. First/third person? Don't mix.

Confused

I don't see how it is a threesome. Is it supposed to be the wife husband and MIL? Cause I can't find the wife in the action

WOW, they're being hard on you...

As a sex story it was not too bad. The premise works okay and the action was sexy.
Keep it up.