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Being watched by the father while having sex with a girl? lol What kind of fantasy is that? Electra complex? C'mon...
I don't really see the point in adding males to the sexual context when writing lesbian stories. Maybe that's just a thing for men to get off.
Anyway, the language is quite good and so is your writing but... that part....
Are you a guy?
I loved the story ( Anna taking charge) but adding the dad just killed the sexy.
Agreeing with Anon. about males in the lesbian context.
I preferred the 1st chapter.
Ignore the anons who don't know what a mind fuck is lol.
My complaint is how short this is... More! More!
Whats the Problem
Just because a male (the father) was added to the lineup doesn't ruin the lesbian story, in fact bring him into the story caused a little excitement for the girls. Come on now be truthful how many of you girls came close to getting caught or did. Come on whats the problem?
Alternatively...
I love this story, but maybe one moan is a little too loud and dad walks in, then the fun begins...
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