All Comments on 'Room for Two? Ch. 02'

Being watched by the father while having sex with a girl? lol What kind of fantasy is that? Electra complex? C'mon...

I don't really see the point in adding males to the sexual context when writing lesbian stories. Maybe that's just a thing for men to get off.

Anyway, the language is quite good and so is your writing but... that part....

Are you a guy?

I loved the story ( Anna taking charge) but adding the dad just killed the sexy.

Agreeing with Anon. about males in the lesbian context.

I preferred the 1st chapter.

Ignore the anons who don't know what a mind fuck is lol.

My complaint is how short this is... More! More!

Just because a male (the father) was added to the lineup doesn't ruin the lesbian story, in fact bring him into the story caused a little excitement for the girls. Come on now be truthful how many of you girls came close to getting caught or did. Come on whats the problem?

I love this story, but maybe one moan is a little too loud and dad walks in, then the fun begins...